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Friday, October 10, 2014
Soft spot
Hi again guys ' yet again I'm in verge of writing a post again . Well for this time period, i wanna share with u guys about one of feelings that might end up as a human being . Duh ' we're not aliens are we? So this sense of feeling that i like to call "Soft spot'. Those words describe the meaning right ? sounds catchy thou . I'm maybe one tough cookie but this little "angel-like creature" named Snowball lighten me up . White as snow and roll like a ball plus a cutie too . I know right now I'm sound exaggerate but tell you what is the truth . Whenever i felt fatigue from a whole day of World War Assignment ( exaggerate again ' bad habit huh) her cuddle next to me brings me cloud nine . Well i was wondering what's your kind of soft spot? Hurm such curiosity ' feel free to talk about it later . Bye for now !
Hi guys, now i'm in a verge of writing a blog. To do so, I write my first post with these wonderful tips below. I found it quite handy in my previous assignment that requires me to prepare a tremendously speech . Well i'm not a man of speech and here goes nothing.
News to live by
with Danny Rabin (You're rock !)
How to Improve Everything You Write in Three Minutes or Less
Step One : When you finish your document , hit CTRL+F to bring up the search function
Step Two : One by one , look foe these words and delete /amend them them .
News to live by
with Danny Rabin (You're rock !)
How to Improve Everything You Write in Three Minutes or Less
Step One : When you finish your document , hit CTRL+F to bring up the search function
Step Two : One by one , look foe these words and delete /amend them them .
- very, just and really (remove all three)
- in order ( delete, as in "i did this in order to do that ")
- that (delete as in "i believe that your are correct")
- quite (delete, excess word)
- thing (replace with specific word for the "thing")
- utilize( switch to "use" or pick another verb)
- get or got (pick another,more descriptive verb)
- -ing verbs ("i am writing "becomes "i write")
Step Three : Print out the document to check your edits.
Step Four : Submit the work with confidence !
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